Villages v/s Big Cities - By Tanvi Agarwal
Life
in a small village may be different than living in a town or city. Villages are
not as developed as cities but now our government has been making the villages
better by providing gas to homes and houses to some people. More than five
years ago, I visited a small village named Barsoi situated in Bihar.
It
took me about ten hours to reach Barsoi. On reaching there, the first thing I
saw was the cow dung on the walls, many wells and hand pumps. After I reached my
relative’s house I saw that the houses were not as developed as they are in the
cities. There were small buildings
unlike the buildings in cities.
But
the greenery of that village left an impact on me. People living in cities do
not take care of their surroundings in spite of having so much. On the other hand, the villagers look after their
village.
I
salute these villagers who take of their village. I would love to visit another
village the next time I get a chance.
wwwwwwwwoooooooo!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful Tanvi, but you have missed some lines. That is in the last paragraph you written, I salute this villagers who take care of their village.
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I would love to visit another village next time if I get a chance.
The underlined word (care) you have missed the line. And in the last paragraph last line there will be no following Words:- Just Check Your Mistake once. They are:-
1. The
And you have missed a word that is check the underlined words:-
I would love to visit another village the next time if I get a chance.
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you have missed a letter called "if". Just check your mistake.
Thanks And Regards,
From Soumyadip Bose
From Class:- IV-A.